I understand the first two photos but not the middle one. I can see that it is normal for you to these things . I think you should've thought of compostion more in those photos.
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amaris
5/9/2013 02:39:31 am
i dont understand the last two very well but i understand the first one very well about how people often text in class and thats pretty much a norm so good jobo
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Alyssa
5/9/2013 02:44:56 am
I like the picture composition in the second on but the first and last are really hard to understand what the social norm is, maybe if you were to increase the white balance in them and make it so there is less noise then they would be better.
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Courtney Rayne Farlow
5/9/2013 02:53:34 am
The last picture contains digital noise. The First picture could be benefited by showing the entire scenario. The second picture is unclear about what the message is... It just looks like some cups? Your composition and story could be improved.
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Annie
5/13/2013 02:25:55 am
You didn't really do a comparison of different perspectives, rather just the eyes of one. I do like the composition of the first photo. Maybe edit a little to reduce the yellowness.
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Bella Q
5/13/2013 02:39:15 am
I like the one with the bowls and cups. It moves my eye around and there is alot of colors to contrast eachother. It has a great composition and its like a swirl.
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Nicholas
5/13/2013 12:34:12 pm
THe second one has an amazing composition however something prevalent in all these photos that bothers me is that they are all yellow to change that you could change your white balance to incandescent since these all seem to be taken inside
